Alice's Question 1

Write a letter to the Agriculture Development Advisory Service, alerting your concern from locals about the 'Beast' being on the loose.

In your letter you should write about:

-Description of the Beast

- The consequences of leaving the Beast roaming the area

- What effect it is having on local farmers by allowing the Beast to roam the area Base your letter on what you have read on the report of " On the trail of the Beast of Bodmin Moor"

Begin your letter:

' Dear the Agriculture Development Advisory Service, I am writing to alert you of the high complaints and concerns from the locals due to the Beast being on the loose.

Write between 1 1/2 and 2 sides, allowing for the size of your handwriting.

Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 5 marks for the quality of your writing.

MARK SCHEME-

A1- Description of the Beast:

- Eyes like yellow orbs

- Foul scream

- squeaky/ squealing noise

- 3ft long with a tail of 18 inches

- A pinky brown colour

- Eyes sort of bright white

A2- The consequence of leaving the Beast roaming the area:

- Kills livestock

- Has a disturbing scream

- Panics locals

- Possible risk of carrying disease

- Could be hunted or injured

A3- What effect it is having on local farmers by allowing the Beast to roam the area:

- Terrorises livestock

- Hides/stalks on their land

- Risk of being shot by farmers

- Reduces the amount of animals for hunters to kill

- Destroys crops

- Farmers result too losing money